Cover Letter Advice

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Hello guys, I am applying for a trader intern position at TransMarket Group this summer. This is the first time I'm writing a cover letter so I need some advice/suggestions on how to make it better. I have also uploaded my resume if you guys want to take a look.
 

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You should probably include the answer to "Why TransMarket Group?" in your cover letter. That was the very first thing I noticed.
 
what, if anything, can you bring to them? you state what they can do for you. also, you need to format it properly. google cover letter and make it look somewhat professional.
 
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